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# 小作文 ​

Dear Xx,

## 第一段：次要目的+主要目的 ​

I am writing this letter to... / This notice is to... 次要目的:（感谢、道歉、悼念等纯粹情感性的目的） thank you for...（/congratulate you for.../apologize for.../do sth）, and to

主要目的:（提建议、意见，介绍信息，进行推荐文章的核心主旨）： ① offer you some suggestions(/information) about sth/how to do sth. ② extend you an invitation to do sth. ③ recommend you sth. ④ do sth.

## 第二段：主体段整体架构： ​

Regarding 主题,there are points I would like to . First of all,论点1. What's more, 论点2. In addition,论点3. For more details,you could refer to the attachment below.

具体内容： 是什么（说明介绍）、为什么（分析利弊）、怎么办（建议意见）

### 1. 是什么（说明介绍） ​

​ 1.1 时间地点 ​① It will be held / It is located in(behind) the Main Building (next Sunday) ​② we will gather in the Main Building next Sunday and set off to the spot ( and please make sure you are then).

​1.2 工作人员指导 ​① our staff will be there to provide you necessary .

​1.3 着装要求 ① it is highly recommended to be properly/warmly/plainly dressed for the

### 2. 为什么选 ta（分析利弊） ​

​2.1 权威认可 ​① has (have) an official award (/qualification / recognition) from the authority. ​② is (are) awarded with the title of (/) Cultural from the United Nations. ​ 2.2 群众基础 ​① enjoys (enjoy) a popularity (/reputation /concern) among 人民群众（/on multiple social platforms).

​2.3 个人喜欢 ​① I personally find it attractive（/interesting/beneficial/necessary) to do sth.

> 万能图书、电影、景点、中华文化代表推荐：the Great Wall

### 3. 怎么办（建议意见） ​

3.1 端正认识 ① it’s advisable to put things into perspective and establish a correct value about sth primarily.

3.2实践经验 ① you could look for relevant experience in this aspect on Zhihu Community.

3.3 知行合一 ① a practical and reasonable plan should be promptly carried out and remain high on your agenda

For more details,you could refer to the attachment below.

## 尾段：对读信人的期望： ​

不回信：（公告、招募、问询、建议） ① I would be glad if you find the information(/suggestions) mentioned above helpful. Please feel free to let me know if you have any further questions.

回信：（建议、介绍、推荐、感谢、道歉、邀请、投诉、申请） ①I would appreciate it if you could take my complaint (/application/resignation/recommendation/invitation/questions) into consideration. And I would be much to you for an early and positive reply.

    												Yours truly
    													Li Ming

# 图表 ​

## 第一段 图表描述段 5行 ​

第1句：图表总体描述

- Were it not for the chart above, a thought-provoking would be neglected:

- With reagrd to sth, 第2-3句：图表细节描述：

- 2 年数据对比：第一句下降，第二句上升，第三句不变

  - In 开始年, B topped the three 主题词（categories）, while in 对比年, a remarkable decline occurred in it by 差值 from 开始年数值 to 结束年数值.
  - By contrast, there was a noticeable jump of 差值 from 开始年数值 to 结束年数值 during the same period in A
  - Meanwhile C grew/decreased at a far more pace, to the degree that it seemed to remain static in 2008.

- 多年数据对比：第一句上升，第二句下降，第三句不变

  - From 开始年 to 结束年, the number(/amount) of 主题词1 was remarkably from only about 起始值 to 结束值.
  - By , the number(/amount) of 主题词2, individuals' , dipped （/slightly）from 起始值 to 结束值 during the same period,
  - Meanwhile C grew/decreased at a far more sluggish pace, to the degree that it seemed to remain static in 2008.

> the number of 可数名词复数 the amount of 不可数名词

- 没有时间表现：第一句最大的，第二句其他的

  - The of A is the highest amongst all the 种类总数 , at approximately 对应百分数, whereas the data of B, C, D as well as others accounts for about 数 2, 数 3 and 数 4 respectively.

- 表格：每列最大值

  - The percentage of A类中最大值对应的人1 has peaked among A类, at approximately A类中最大值%.
  - Meanwhile, the proportions of B类 are highest for B类中最大值对应的人2, at roughly B类中最大值%.
  - In contrast, C类 is C类中最大值% amongst those C类中最大值对应的人3, the maximum value among all these categories.

  > Meanwhile, the proportions of B类 are equal between 人1 and 人2, at roughly xxx%.

## 第二段 原因分析段 10-11行 ​

Initially，原因1. Additionally,原因2.Finally,原因3.

### ==1.社会经济科技发展== ​

第一句： a well-known saying from 's "Critique of 's of Right(1843)" should be quoted here:"Economic basis decides superstructure".

第二句： ①In the face of the rapidly evolving society, many individuals, if not most(/especially xxx), are becoming increasingly wealthy, which provides them with a fundamental economic basis to do sth.

### ==2.经济全球化、都市化、压力== ​

①The human race having entered a completely new stage in its history,with the increasingly rapid economic and urbanization, brought to our attention are more enhancements both in individuals and society, the one mentioned above——XX名词短语

great strain and intense competition,

### ==5.人们思想转变== ​

The tendency has been bound up with the turning of people' outlooks and perspectives on 主题词.In other words,(for sb,)the fact that sth（之前觉得重要的) is no longer as essential as it used to be demonstrates what really counts is sth(现在觉得重要的东西)

### ==6.文化的多样性/包容性== ​

Noting the inevitable diversity and inclusiveness of culture,there are an array of options facing every person——and some of them choose the very way of doing sth.

### ==7.政府/学校== ​

①好The local administration/universities,exerting effective and strict supervision on sth(/playing a crucial role in enhancing these ideas showed in the chart ), make it possible for us to keep abreast of the latest news and spare no efforts to achieve our goals accounting for the phenomenon that XX

### ==8.多媒体== ​

①all kinds of publicity, be the newspapers or the Internet, advocate vigorously what really matters is 主题词，inducing dwellers to do sth.

## 第三段 归纳总结段 1-3行 ​

选择2：中性，多种选择一静态图 On balance, 主题词 is a subjective(/sensory) experience for today's individuals（/undergraduates) as what they focus on are the factors affecting the whole experience——to be held in high regard by 相关产业(/society).

选择3：动态图：趋势 This trend，in the background of economic boom in China, will probably become dominant in the foreseeable future.

选择5：双刃剑 Supposing that individuals are armed with intelligence and caution, they are supposed to bypass the potential drawbacks of sth as well as take advantage of all the merits.

# 图画 ​

### 第一段 ​

第 1 句：总体描述 ①Were it not for the drawing above,a thought-provoking phenomenon would be neglected:

第 2 句：图画细节描述 ​ ==2.1 单图== ​ 在这个场景中，有一个中心人物做着什么事，这个中心人物是怎样的，与周边事物发生了什么，周边事物又是怎样的。 ​ Step1：找到核心人物：位置+动作——倒装 ​ Step2：其他可描述的内容：说话，神情，其他动作——非谓语 ​ Step3：找到周边事物：主人公，周边人/事——定从 At a crossroads stand an army of graduates,wearing with an air of confusion in their faces, who are faced with four choices: hunting for jobs,taking the Postgraduate Entrance Examination, going abroad and starting a business.

# 材料 ​

# 词汇 ​

## 大学生 ​

- 大学生：college students
- 大一：freshman
- 大二：sophomore
- 大三：junior
- 大四：senior

## 描述社会 ​

形容词-oriented society

- Technologically & Digitally Driven（技术与数字化）
- Education-Focused & Knowledge-Based（教育与知识）
- Economically Competitive & Consumption-Oriented（经济与消费）
- Rapidly Evolving & Progressing（社会发展与变迁）
- Youth-Centric & Culturally Blended（人口与文化）
- Eco-Conscious & Sustainable（环境与可持续性）

## 个人发展追求 ​

Another significant factor is the pursuit of personal development, as individuals increasingly prioritize self-improvement and career success.

人们变得有钱后用：As disposable incomes rise and are better met, people are naturally inclined to pursue cultural enrichment

## 人际关系 ​

strengthen social bonds and maintain interpersonal relationships.

## 大额计数 ​

- 百 - Hundred

## 为了更加方便的生活 ​

for a more convenient life more innovations in public services and infrastructure

## 更加偏向于... ​

the increasing preference for 喜欢的 over 不喜欢的

## 物质和文化 ​

material wealth

people's cultural pride and confidence have been increasingly enhanced.

the pursuit of cultural and intellectual experiences, such as visiting museums.

## 不仅...重要，...同样也重要 ​

They realize that classroom learning alone is insufficient, and practical experience is equally essential for comprehensive growth.

# 高频词 ​

convenient environmental awareness diverse xxx options eco-friendly lifestyles/travel Promotion of NEVs. Rapid advancement in renewable energy technology Faster pace of life Improving career competitiveness quality of life personal development and interests. Increased opportunities for